Changes due to feedback

My origianl plan was to use my friend sutton as the main character for the front image, but then because i did the photoshoot in the light and against a non blank background it was hard to photoshop so i decided to change the image to be more effective.

This is what i came up with but dew to guidlines it was not useable because the style model i used was one from americs and they have different rules to the uk so i chnaged it to my friend sutton which took my effort in photoshop but it worked.

The image above would have been my style model if there was no guidlines to what i can produce.
I also took on board what my audience said and changed thing to the main image e.g.made the main image bigger and added extra colour lines for more effect.